Thursday, April 30, 2009

Today i started writing my second paragraph which was about my second characteristic religion. The first thing i did was spread out my cards for religion and i organized them. After organizing my cards i made a plan for how I'm going to write my paragraph. When i started writing my paragraph there were a lot of information so i had to remove a lot of sentences to make the essay fit the word count. Mrs. Korbatits told us that by this lesson we should at least finnish our second characteristics and thankfully i did, i thought i wouldn't finnish because i started a day late but i worked hard and really focused so i accomplished my goal.   

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