Today was our final day to do the essay, it was our last day to proof read, write and edit our essay. All I had to do today was to proof read my essay. When I was done I printed it out and handed it in. The next step of this unit is to make a powerpoint and so what I did for the rest of the lesson was find pictures for the power point.

Today i finished my bibliography at the start of the lesson and then the entire i was proof reading my work. I had a lot of grammar mistakes that i fixed. I changed a lot of sentences because they didn't make a lot of sense when i was reading them. I had to take out some sentences because it was repeated, hopefully next lesson I will continue proof reading my essay and by the end of the lesson i will print out my essay and hand it in.    

Today i started writing my last paragraph for my essay which was my concluding paragraph. It took me about half the lesson to finnish my concluding paragraph when i was done i started doing my bibliography. Thank fully by the end of the lesson i finished my paragraph. I have two more lesson until i have to hand in my so in these nest two lessons i'll be proof reading my work. 

Today i was working on my third paragraph which is about my third characteristic education. The goal for this lesson was to finnish the essay, unfortunately i didn't finnish my essay i just have one paragraph which is the concluding paragraph. We were informed today that the essay was do in on Thursday. I'm hoping that next lesson i'll finnish my concluding paragraph and my bibliography and that the other two lessons i'll for proof reading my work.   

Today i started writing my second paragraph which was about my second characteristic religion. The first thing i did was spread out my cards for religion and i organized them. After organizing my cards i made a plan for how I'm going to write my paragraph. When i started writing my paragraph there were a lot of information so i had to remove a lot of sentences to make the essay fit the word count. Mrs. Korbatits told us that by this lesson we should at least finnish our second characteristics and thankfully i did, i thought i wouldn't finnish because i started a day late but i worked hard and really focused so i accomplished my goal.   

Today i started writing my second paragraph which was going to be about my 1st characteristic which was ancient Roman jobs. The first thing i did was i took all my cards for my characteristic jobs and i organized them. After i did that i made a plan of how i was going to organize the cards to make a paragraph, i started writing my paragraph. The paragraph was easier to write than the one before because i had all the information in front of me.  

Today we started writing our essays. The whole class started yesterday but i was absent so I had to catch up. The first thing was i planned my introduction paragraph. Then when I was done planning i started writing my paragraph. I had to change it a lot because when ever i wrote something and then read it again it didn't sound very good but finally i wrote a really go introduction paragraph.