Today was our final day to do the essay, it was our last day to proof read, write and edit our essay. All I had to do today was to proof read my essay. When I was done I printed it out and handed it in. The next step of this unit is to make a powerpoint and so what I did for the rest of the lesson was find pictures for the power point.

Today i finished my bibliography at the start of the lesson and then the entire i was proof reading my work. I had a lot of grammar mistakes that i fixed. I changed a lot of sentences because they didn't make a lot of sense when i was reading them. I had to take out some sentences because it was repeated, hopefully next lesson I will continue proof reading my essay and by the end of the lesson i will print out my essay and hand it in.    

Today i started writing my last paragraph for my essay which was my concluding paragraph. It took me about half the lesson to finnish my concluding paragraph when i was done i started doing my bibliography. Thank fully by the end of the lesson i finished my paragraph. I have two more lesson until i have to hand in my so in these nest two lessons i'll be proof reading my work. 

Today i was working on my third paragraph which is about my third characteristic education. The goal for this lesson was to finnish the essay, unfortunately i didn't finnish my essay i just have one paragraph which is the concluding paragraph. We were informed today that the essay was do in on Thursday. I'm hoping that next lesson i'll finnish my concluding paragraph and my bibliography and that the other two lessons i'll for proof reading my work.